The helicopter turbulently jerked forward;the crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life.The helicopter crashed into a million pieces of metal and glass.A instant prick touched my finger;tingles went down the back of my spine.Where is he?Horrible thoughts clouded my mind as I thought the unthinkable.Am I going to make it ?I closed my eyes and hoped.I saw something but I didn’t know what it was..I glanced at the helicopter, the pilot was gone!I looked around desperate for him, for someone,for anyone. I didn’t care if it was a stranger as long as they help me. I’m alone,hungry,thirsty and need help.I someone, anyone.I stood up and was dazzled by what I saw.
Where am I? I slowly turned my head and saw this weird place. I realised where I was in a rainforest. Shadows lurked in every corner. I thought I was going to get killed. Just then there was a loud noise, it echoed through the forest. Who is there? What is there? What is going on? Is it a tribe or an animal? I didn’t want to find out. I heard the same echo again. What should I do? I asked my self.
I can’t get away from this place .All I can think about is the money the fame.I got closer to it step by step finally I touched it. As I grabbed it I could hear funny noises in the distance. I couldn’t get away. My imagination came to life. is this the end for me? It was all I can think about is death Thoughts raced around my head. Will I die or live? Zooming out of the door and onto the ancient path pathway. Shall I keep going? Homuch does this mean to me? Am I going to survive? I must I won’t give upSuddenly they caught up with me and i lost it. I thought could this be the end the. Suddenly they spoted me so i started sprinting.My hard was aching. I felt i was going to collapse. I want to live but can i? If i run faster will i lose them? I don’t know what to to do. Maybe i should hide my self. I am scared. I dont no what to do. i was running really fast and i was tied. I was feeling guilty of stealing. It least i’ll be rich.
Earth veered from underneath my feet showering the portentous pools below.I fell down like a rock.Was it an earthquake?Bleak water engulfed.The water covered me,I thought I wouldn`t make to the next island.The water felt like it had turned into ice, but I was determined to make it.This was all up to me.I swam to safety where I bumped into the pilot.”What should we do?” I asked.He remained silent.I swam as fast as I could Then I saw sharks swimming in circles, waiting for the next victim! I wanted to runaway!! or is it to late?! Would this be the end of me??? I close my eyes and waited… For hope that I will live to see LIGHT.
The helicopter turbulently jerked forward ;the crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life.This is terrible!I couldn’t see anything even though my eyes were being forced open.I landed down.A mysterious wind shadowed out all the light and clouded my thoughts.But then,through all the mist,I see something glimmering.What is it?I can’t tell what it is?My hand gently reaches out and touches it.OWWW it was the blade of the helicopter.Then I thought of something:where is the driver?I hesitate, if I get up I could die.I began to look for him.
Where am I? This place is full of eyes of horror. I am being watched but who or what by? I ran not knowing up from down. Something strange is going on around this unknown place. All that was on my mind was who or what it was? I stopped worrying and carried on. My heart was pounding because I didn’t know where I was going. Something moved like lightning, I looked but I say nothing. Should I hide? I looked up.I saw my escape. A door wide open that I can dash into. I ran into the little room but the door had no lock so I thought I just going to keep hold…..
I can’t get away from this place. There are too many thoughts racing around my head and they won’t go away. Out of the blue, something caught my eye. The beautiful shimmering idol. I reached out to grab it when I heard a noise. I can’t believe it. As the noise came near I sprinted with all my might. I feel the warmth of the monkeys getting closer to me. Is this the end? It can’t be, can this be real? It felt like all the blood rushed to my head as I raced out the doorway.
Suddenly they caught up with me and I lost it. The monkeys were crazy, what were they doing? When I turned around I saw them jumping at me trying to scratch me. I was so scared all I could do was run. As I ran I thought that the monkeys would stop chasing me but they won’t. I was nervous I was wondering will I live or die? I think I have a plan. Climb up a tree and hide. I’m Guy dangerous I don’t run away, or do I? Let’s find out.
Earth veered from under my feet,showering the portentous pools below.I could feel the agony in my body strudling. I felt sweat dripping down my face.My heart is pumping with fear. I could feel something nibbling my feet while I was looking for safety. It was something so strong that it has the ability to. My feet are torn away from solid grow, with it my hope .I thought I died.The air brushes against my bone – chilling my face! I knew that it was the end . No it wasn’t, I was surprised to see i’m alive. Or maybe i’m dead?Water laid at my body a familiar face hovered above me.
The helicopter turbulently jerked forward; the crumbling engen uncontrollably exploded into life. I am helplessly thrown. I’m stuck into oblivion the only thing I know is that I’m plummeting to earth.I could see earth getting closer and closer,I knew I wasn’t going to make it so I shut my eyes and hoped. Where am I am I dead or alive please tell me I’m alive.My eyes slowly fluttered open, I’m alive but at the moment I don’t no wheather it would be better not to be. I was so confused. As thoughts raced through my mind, I stood up and balanced my self. What is that gloomy figure over in the distant. I moved closer and closer and suddenly I knew what it was.
I can’t get away from this place. Where should I go? All of the negative feelings i’ve ever had come racing back.. What shall I do and where am I? I see a golden colour shimmer in the corner of my eye. Could it be? It is the idol i’ve been dreaming about! The idol that will make my life change stood in front of me. I grabbed it but nudged a statue of a monkey, it came alive! Running for my life. How much does this really mean to me? Running and running still no ending, will I live?
Where am i? The sounds echoed around this mythical place. I started to walk until i saw something. “Whos there” i shouted all i heard was my echo shared around this vast piece of land. Then i thought i heard somethings following me. Then i looked at my hand and there was a symbol, a symbol of a face. “What is it” i asked my self. Then i saw a light glowing like fireflies so i thought i could take shelter there. I started to walk to it and see what it is. It was like a made palace made out of gold justin the corners of my eye i spied something. My heart pounded as i made my way to the unknown building. I climbed to the temple door.
suddenly, they caught up with me and I lost it.I have no idea where to go.What should I do next? I ran as fast as a bullet shooting .I was jumping and ducking my feet were on fire.They were so so hot I thought they are so so fast.I felt like I’m going to fall off .I started to calm down.I was scared.
Earth veered from under my feet, showering the portentous pool’s below. Suddenly, I felt a strange swaying motion rocking me back and forth. I’m falling! Is this the end of me? I was hoping to stay alive, one moment I thought it. My mind was rushing through thoughts. “Help!” I want to cry out but there is only one person who can save me, who is me. Why did I steal the idol? Now I have this scary fear in my heart, I couldn’t barely move a muscle. Greed filled my mind. So does sweat. I saw safety with a quick glance. With a sigh of relief, I bumped into the pilot. Happily, we made a raft. I wonder if we’ll ever escape?
The helicopter turbulently jerks forward engine crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life. I suddenly dropped in shock,it felt like I was flying.I looked around me it was just trees and mud.It was a, golden dust tip pyramid. What exactly was it?I gently moved forward. Not knowing where I was as I glanced up and I saw a bark of tree.I slowly as felt a sharp pain as I realised the pilot was gone.It was worst than my nightmare
Where am I? My head is full of questions that I could not answer. Eyes were everywhere I was being followed. What is following me? I asked myself in my mind. I heard footsteps behind me. I turned there was nothing. What could have been caused the thudding on the lifeless floor? thought it could be a tree chopping towards me. I heard another loud bang, I heard leaves being crushed underneath me. What is following me? why? I saw a temple, I saw a door, racing to it, I found a chance to get rid of the thing that was chasing me. Do I have the time to do it? I saw the temple behind them, that’s when I took the wrong turn, I ran towards it.
I can’t get away from this place. I think i’ve seen it before, but where? My dreams are coming alive, my thoughts are racing through my mind. Am I alone is anyone here? That is all I wanted to know, apart from the how am I meant to go home? There it was and I reached for it but as i reached for it but as I touched it I could hear howling monkeys in the distance. Out I came zooming out of the temple door
Suddenly they caught up with me and i lost it. will i live or die? what are they and what were they doing. I was running i jumped and i got away. but it wasn’t over yet it was just beginning. i ran faster faster and faster until they started to disappear. i don’t know what to do now. I think i should fight. No that would be crazy or would it be. I could die. or i could live or i could be injured.
Earth veered from under my feet, showering the portentous pools below.My feet trembleswhile, running through the hard stone path.My knees are tnickling with blood but i carry on running. With a fall I was splashing trying to flout. I had a feeling i would die,right here,right now. Breaking loose from the path it begins to ebb away. Am i still alive? I hesitate in fear. I tried to seal my hands. I couldn’t even move them. I swam to the island were bumped into someone. he looked familiar?The relief of life immersed me in its warm embrace. Will I ever escape from this creepy and magic place?
Here is my temple run paragraph(Climax) which I had to do whilst doing Slow Writing.
He could hear the wall’s crumbling and could see the golden idol but could smell damp and wet dog.Slow,Cooling,Breezing wind blew on his face. Slowly, he reached for the idol. As he pulled the golden idol back he nudged one of the monkey statues and they came alive. This was it. What shall he do? Rrrruuuunnnn.
Sliping,sliding and sluttering from the huge clif.
Guy Dangerous who had ginger hair ,fell into the dark blue water.
After that he was swimming for hours and hours to find and island and food.
Slowly he heard a noise.
A minute later he saw a hat of a pilot moving,he got it out and saw the pilot swimming.
Finally,they went out of the gloomy ,blue water and started to bulid a wooden ship.
Would they ever escape?
How long left?Staring at the skies, with a puffy clouds and a bright coloured golden star, he wondered how his mum was doing.Suddenly, the plane struck down like a dead bird, he passed out.Awake and alive.As his eyes adjusted, he realised the pilot had gone so he searched for him immediately.
The screeching was unbearable it got louder as I got closer. It was beautiful and it shone in the dark as I touched it I was blissful. Swiftly I took the golden idol from its stand. I heard something move and then it grabbed me. What was it ?
This is a story about temple run.
My eyes fluted open to hear the sound of birds tweeting and the sight of monkey’s swinging. Swiftly, quickly but luxuriously the monkey’s sawed through the trees. My strong arms pulled me up the trees as I searched for refuge then I saw the temple. I was exited because no adventurer as ever got inside. Finally, the temple. Who knows what was inside?
Snatching the golden treasure without him knowing the they are the risks. The idol’s features shimmered upon the temple ceiling. Suspiciously, he heard howling monkeys in the distance.
As quick as a flash, came out him zooming out of the temple door and onto the ancient pathways, Fear painted his face making his face pale as a lion’s fur. Reaching his final destination but will he survive?…
The frail old man slumped down in the giant black chair. The dark and empty room was filled with sadness. He was all alone. His twitching fingers ran wild playing the piano. Gradually the memories came flooding in; the traumatic times clouded his mind!
An icy chill shivered down his spine as a recent memory came rushing back to him. He visualised her cold frail lips touch his face. Her wrinkly fingers delicately laid on the keys, he knew there was only one person who could play like that, it was his wife! Delight filled his heart, but the pain of losing her never left him.
Suddenly his fingers danced on the keyboard, as fast as lightening, boom an echoing chill exploded into life, the enclosed secret was finally opened. Guilt dripped down his face, his eyes bursting with slow tear drops, they showed the horror of what had happened. What would of happened if? would he be alive today? would he forgive me if he was here today? He was broken. The memory of watching and letting his army friend die still torments him today.
He immersed himself even deeper into his memories. Cautiously he glanced up at his pale, old grandad, he laid the present before his very eyes. For a while he stared, anxiously, almost frightened at it, you could see thoughts travelling round his mind, is it a chocolate bar? His heart was pounding as fast as lightening, he looked down tentatively at the thin white box, it edged closer. Slowly his young healthy hand opened it, his heart stopped and his eyes widened excitedly it was a wooden horse – he cherished it for a life time.
The surreal hallucination finally ceased, he reluctantly drifted back into the real world. Suddenly, a tall darkish, brown wooden horse galloped past his beady, hazel eyes. His heart warmed and his chiselled old mouth and craggy face showed the expression of happiness. His grandchild cantered around the new illuminating room in total exultation, nonchalantly the boy walked closer and closer to the glossy high spec black piano. Slowly he sat down in the puffy leather chair and tentatively pressed on the last note, he glanced up.
As the night fell, he gently lay his hands on his one and only friend.He started to play a tune with his friend.His thoughts took him back to were it all started.
A cold chill shivered down his spine;the hairs on the back of his neck stood up as a recent memory came back to him.Gently he felt a cold figure touched his face like a winter breeze.The breeze passed by and drifted away,he felt alone again.
I live with my mom and dad. I’ve got one brother,sister and me. I like spicy foods. on my birthday i’ve got ipad . My old school is redwood primary school. I had lots of fun but i like my new much. I went to london with my mom and dad.
In school we had a poem contest where if we won we would preform our poem at St Benedict’s theatre . I decided to share my poem with you .
Its pink eyes stare
You can see joy proudness hunger
Its teeth shimmer sharp as razors
Who put me here ? Why ?
The rock I hide behind is no use
It sees me it growls it attacks
My life apperes in front of me
A vision of Joy Hope Dreams
Its on top of me
My own blood splatters me
I hear the crunching of bones the ripping of flesh
Then it stops my pain goes
Then I see it the thing that killed me
A thing never seen before
A thing so ugly its stare melts flesh
Its teeth chew through stone
Its saliva burns
Now the silence surrounds me
P.S. I wrote this by myself
I’m Bradley c, the one that never passes tests
I always think to myself I am the best
I met my Angel that came to me
Will she be there just for me
Am I in a play, am I in a drama
Did I really think she was a charmer