Slow writing challenge

It was a warm, sunny and breezy day on the beach. I was excited! In the shimmering water       ,reflecting in the sun, were lots of seashells and crabs. The sparkling sunlight twinkled in the sky. The ice-cream seller was doing great business. Quickly people started qeueiung for ice-creams.

2 thoughts on “Slow writing challenge

  1. Dear Niamh,
    My name is Yam and I just read your slow writing challenge, I think your beginning is great! I especially liked your Opening sentence.

    From Yam Y4TF Shrewsbury International school Bangkok

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