Slow Writing Challenge- Molly

I looked ahead at the snowy, towering hill I was on, with lots of happy people on it. This was it. It was the first time I’d slegded, I was very nervous. The snow, as white as a sheet, seemed like it was trying to trip me up on purpose. My mum and dad stood encouraging me. Bravely, I sat on it, and my dad gave me one big push and then, I was off.

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5 thoughts on “Slow Writing Challenge- Molly

  1. Well done Molly, you have followed the rules carefully and your writing is extremely well organised. I like the way you have concentrated on your feelings as you go sledging for the first time; I would imagine you would be extremely nervous!

    I do wonder if we could improve a certain adjective in there though…

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