slow writing

It wus snowing I did not know what to do .It wus really chilly outside the ice wus slippy like a snails gew.I could not belif my eyes it wus happy until the snow had tern into ice. It wusent fun because you could make snow men then the joy came back on Theresday. it wus like a dream come true.

 

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6 thoughts on “slow writing

  1. This piece of writing is very descriptive Daniel, well done. I can see you are concentrating on your use of full stops much more as well.

    I hope we can see more of this in your class work!

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