This is my 500 word challenge.
This is such a gripping story Dylan.I love the way you put the big dillema in capitals to show it was important.The type of font you have used makes it very eye-catching.
A great achievement. Well done for taking your story through to the end. A very gruesome end for both characters.
Loving a bit of Elvis & the ninjas. Great stuff.
You have included a lot of detail here Dylan. I’m really pleased you have been trying to improve on both your punctuation and spelling – you should be very proud.
The first two paragraphs are brilliant openers and really pull the reader in. Try to slow down your writing and keep to this high standard!
You have written a fantastic story.
Is it fun doing that?
Is it tired?
Well done Dylan. You have included a time connective at the start of the story. You have included more detail. This story pulls the reader in! keep up the good work! 🙂
I like your time connective ,4 years later, but next time remember your comma.
Some very good time connectives but remember to put a comma after it.
Thank you Mr W I liked it to. 😛 🙂
I like your 500 word challenge Dylan, it’s great!
I like the idea of doing a 500 word challange
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