My 500 word challenge

This is my 500 word challenge. I forgot to post it ages ago, but here it is!

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Future Dreams

31st July

It’s 2148. The world is a place of doom. The robots have come.They came to take me as a prisoner. We have done all we can, but computers are taking over the world. The world has turned into one big block of computerised metal. I’m in a dungeon at the moment, longing to take one last breath of air, because I know the end is near.

1st August

The computer doctors have just said I have 2 months to live. Good. I want to escape this devastating, heartbreaking world. I’m the last human on earth; at least I think I am. Everyone is so lucky – everyone except me – to be dead and away from hell. It’s not fair.

5th August

I have just had breakfast. It was horrible, as it always is. Pickled mushrooms. But I suppose a monster would have different taste buds from me. I think food and this diary are the only things that aren’t electrical. Even I have an electrical brain to make me live for a very long time. Not forever, thank goodness. Nothing would replace the year 2012. The olympics were on then. In England.That country was normal then.

15th August

I’m sorry that I have been so long, diary. I have been praying to God that time would go by quick so I could be in peaceful heaven. But maybe that has been taken over too! I will just have to hope, for that is all I have left.

20th August

I have thought of a (hopefully) groundbreaking plan! I shall go to sleep for about 15 days, but if I wake I will try and go to sleep again, then lots of my life will have passed!

10th September
I have done it! Only 20 days of dread left. I wonder what’s for lunch today. Iced cauliflower, maybe, I don’t know. But now I have a chance, a chance that could make my life the best life I have had for ages. I will see you tomorrow Diary.

16th September
What have I done? What have I done to deserve this? I have about 15 days to live and now they tell me. I am probably going to cry for the rest of my life. There is one more human on earth. A girl, like me. They only found her yesterday, hiding on an island.

18th September

GUESS WHAT? I am going to see her and I might get to live longer and have a friend because the doctor was wrong! I shall be devastated if I go, but it was what I wanted so I can’t moan. I have to go now because they are going to check my brain.

20th September

I get to live with the girl! I’m dancing around my cell! My heart is pumping with excitement! This is the best day ever. I am going to talk to her now. Bye Diary, see you tomorrow.

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The End

One thought on “My 500 word challenge

  1. Wow what a great story.I love the way instead of the future being nice it is horrible.I also like the way you go straight into the action with the world is a place of doom

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