100WC Annabelle

It was Tuesday, “I hate Tuesday!” exclaimed Molly.
“We all do,”  replied Toby, Molly’s older brother, “It’s part of life.” continued Toby.
“Be quiet you to, Molly bath time.” mum said
“Fine mum” Molly sighed. As Molly walked to the bathroom Tigger hopped out in front of her. Tigger is Toby’s orange and black cat. Toby has trained Tigger to be very mysterious so when Tiggers around you need to be careful. Tigger did have a sister but they were separated at birth. As molly was running the bath Tigger jumped in, Tigger is one of them strange cats that actually like water. Weird cat.

6 thoughts on “100WC Annabelle

  1. Really good story! Keep it up! The only thing I would say is don’t say tigger is one of them strange cats, say tigger is one of those strange cats!

  2. This is a really interesting post you have used the words in some really interesting ways.well done keep posting 🙂

  3. You hooked me as a reader from the beginning sentence Annabelle, I really want to know why no-one likes Tuesdays! What other mysterious things does the cat do or like?
    You tried very hard with speech punctuation, well done. Did you miss any other punctuation in your piece of writing?
    Keep up the good work!

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