6 thoughts on “My story

  1. Your description in this story really shows what a brilliant writer you can be when you put your mind to it. Just through reading your words, I really felt sorry for Tom. I especially liked the ending to your story – very emotional.

    Keep concentrating and taking your time – there is no reason why all of your stories cannot be this descriptive. You should be very proud!

    We will continue to work on different ways to start our sentences 🙂

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