Slow Writing Challenge

Gloomy, dark, miserable. A the mist swept across my face, I walked down to the lighthouse. Slowly, I walked to it. My cousin, that loved this lighthouse, came up to me. Whispering to me. As quiet as a mouse, he said to me “you’ll regret coming here” and then I froze.

2 thoughts on “Slow Writing Challenge

  1. This is a very dramatic piece of writing Niamh! It is full of suspense – if this was in one of your stories, I would definitely be reading on.

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