Slow Writing Annabel M

Tall , mysterious , creepy . The clouds rolled in as the sky grew dark . Anxiously , I staggered towards it regretting every step . I noticed the flashing , as if somebody was in , in time with the lightning . Who was it ? The sound as high pitched as grinding metal drowned the thunder , it was my scream .

3 thoughts on “Slow Writing Annabel M

  1. This is beautifully described Annabel. I enjoyed the description of you regretting your actions – I want to know more!

    There is one use of punctuation in the final sentence – can you see what it might be?

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