Slow writing

One stormy night.There was a boy and a girl called bob and barberet.They walked quickly but didn’t look behind them.Because they were scared, they walked quickly. They heard a bang. the lightouse collapsed they tryed to run as fast as a cheetah but it caught up.

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  1. Well done Kimi. This is really descriptive.

    Try and think of another word instead of walked quickly because you’ve used it twice.

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