Slow writing

One stormy night.There was a boy and a girl called bob and barberet.They walked quickly but didn’t look behind them.Because they were scared, they walked quickly. They heard a bang. the lightouse collapsed they tryed to run as fast as a cheetah but it caught up.

One thought on “Slow writing

  1. Well done Kimi. This is really descriptive.

    Try and think of another word instead of walked quickly because you’ve used it twice.

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