slow writing challenge

The towering figure. The waves clashed against the dark shadow in the distance and the light from the figure shone over the vast ocean.  Cautiously, he went to explore the shimmering water, what was it he    pondered? He could just make out that it was a light house, the mystical fog surrounded the gleaming white light house the density of the fog made it hard to waft away. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR, HELP MEEEEEEE! My heart was racing, it was pitch black  as dark as the night sky, where was I, what was happening?

 

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  1. Well done Niall that was a great piece of work.You have included lots of description and if you did another paragraph people would read on till the end. :}

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