My 100 Word Challenge

This is my 100 Word Challenge.

After watching hundreds of TV shows, I decided to go to the moon. As I got there, I saw a figure. It was blue, small and oval. I can speak alien so I said ” Are you hungry? You can share with me!” It said” Yes.” It snatched my lunch and ate it. The alien scoffed it down. I carried on eating. The alien didn’t notice me, but then he said in his language “Can you help me? and I said “ OK!” When I got back to my rocket it was gone. What shall I do? How do I get home?….

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5 thoughts on “My 100 Word Challenge

  1. What a dilemma! I like the way that you ended your 100WC with questions, this makes your readers think about your writing.
    I also like the wide range of punctuation that you have included in your writing, well done. 🙂
    Next time, try to remember to use a new line for a new speaker, this makes it easier for your reader to follow your story.

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  2. Well done Chiara! this is really interesting to read. Keep You the good writing!

    If You were to write another bit to this, what would it be?

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