3 thoughts on “100 wc

  1. This tells the reader what happened, where you were before and after the accident.
    Well done Poppy! 🙂

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  2. A well written 100wc Poppy, with a great range of sentence starters. It is clear that you have a bad relationship with Rick and this is shown by the end of the story.

    Please check the end of your story so that it makes sense. Changing the order of your sentences might help with this.

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  3. Hi Poppy, I like the way you have written your 100 word challenge as a flashback/recount piece, starting off with the first shocking statement and then immediately going back to the past to explain it. You show that you have a secure understanding of how important verb tenses are in this type of writing, including describing Rick in the present tense – after all, unfortunately he’s still around isn’t he? Well done.

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