100 wc Phillip

 

I was in the sunlit ocean, when something deadly approached with Hell’s face. Something, that could kill you with a look of his eyes. I don’t know what it was but I already know it was something that was extinct until this happened. I noticed it lurk near me every time. Is this just in my head or is this real? It couldn’t be. It just couldn’t be…

 

This just has to be a dream. Suddenly, the pain in my arm burns. The more I thought of it the more it hurts. What is this. Is this just a dream. What is it. What is it…

 

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2 thoughts on “100 wc Phillip

  1. Lots of build up here Phillip – well done. I like the way you haven’t told the reader whether it was a dream or not, even by the end of the story!

    Remember to use question marks for your questions!

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