WW2

Dear Mr W,

Our  captain has chosen you and your oldest son to come fight in the army.We have a shortage of men in the army and the Germans have collected loads of men and they will take over Great Britain and the others.

Your son will be in the  airplane and you will be on the ground fighting with some others.

You will have to come to our shop and buy the weapons and clothes.

Sadly  I didn’t know how to fight  properly and I got shot.Suddenly the pain in my arm started to be so powerful I had to scream for help

5 thoughts on “WW2

  1. Wow your 100wc is exellant Maria. It is a letter. No 100wc has been done as a letter befor this is a fantastic 100wc. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  2. Hello Maria & thank you for this super 100wc. I enjoyed the way you chose to write the opening part as a letter – it really grabbed my attention. I feel sorry for your character – it doesn’t sound like they had a great time fighting in the war! Do remember to proof read before publishing – can you spot where any missing bits of punctuation might go?
    Keep on blogging!
    Mr K 🙂

  3. You have thought of a very original way of approaching the 100wc Maria. The letter introduces your character well, but I wonder if it needed to be so long (for example, did you need to include the last sentence?)

    A shorter letter would have allowed you more words with which to describe the pain in your arm!

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