4 thoughts on “The Crash

  1. A very descriptive 100wc Joe. You have shown that you can paint a picture with your words as you have set the scene so well.

    Your final sentences needs punctuating a little more carefully – can you spot where?

  2. Wow! What a well thought out composition.
    Well done! Your description of the bleeding “…like a bursting volcano” drive home your intension of making the scene excalate.

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