My short story

As the sun came out, my eyes closed into a deep, dark sleep. When I drifted off into my own world, I landed in the clouds. The clouds weren’t normal, though. They were a pinky colour and very fluffy. There was a man who was telling me something but nothing was coming out off his mouth. This world wasn’t normal. This is my world.

3 thoughts on “My short story

  1. I want to read more! A great start here Ciara, perfectly punctuated, well described and with sentences of different length – well done!

  2. Well done Ciara! I didn’t know you could write like that!

    You could write more story’s in the house then, couldn’t you!

    Helen (Mum)

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