All  aboard! The radiant sun shone on us as we bordered our flight to Spain, no one could have predicted what was going to happen next! The flight was going fine, better than had been predicted, I saw the birds swoop down and suddenly! The left engine was out! I was horrified, I didn’t now what to do. The horrorification of it. The foreseen horrors all awaited us in the shark ridden waters! The plane began to descend, we were plummeting back down to earth, faster than the speed of light, the plane fell into darkness, what would happen to us?

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  1. Wow Niall – what an action packed story. You have used dramatic language well to build the tension and suspense and I want to know what happens next.
    Be careful not to over-use exclamation marks or they start to lose their effect on the reader.
    Keep up the hard work,

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