Temple run

Snatching the golden treasure without him knowing the they are the risks. The idol’s features shimmered upon the temple ceiling. Suspiciously, he heard howling monkeys in the distance.

As quick as a flash, came out him zooming out of the temple door and onto the ancient pathways, Fear painted his face making his face pale as a lion’s fur. Reaching his final destination but will he survive?… 

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  1. This is a very good piece of writing Michaella.

    I love the sentence starters you have used because it makes the writing more interesting to read. You should check the first sentence to make sure it makes sense.

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