The shadow! by Luke

I woke up with a fright.Someone was watching me, I’m sure of it!I could not sleep at all that night. Early in the morning about 8:00 I had a stroll in the park.The same feeling came across me.It was hard to forget!I turned around quickly nothing their.Apart from my shadow,I blinked and it was gone!I ran back home without a stop. Finally,I was at the safest place I could be,HOME!

I saw my shadow it was walking up the stairs step at a time.All of a sudden,I saw the shadow slowly moving now getting closer to me!I dropped my keys with fright. Know where to go I thought fast what was the enemy to light…dark!I shut every curtain in my  house finally,it was gone.But not for long…

I felt safe,very safe.

2 years later,I remembered that day,that problem,that shadow!The same nightmare I had 2 years ago!But would it come back?

 

The end

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9 thoughts on “The shadow! by Luke

  1. Wow Luke your story is very very good well done!! It builds up to make you read on I want you to make another one. I loved the end bit ‘2 years later,I remembered that day,that problem,that shadow!The same nightmare I had 2 years ago!But would it come back?’. There was nothing I didn’t like about it!

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  2. Your story is exellant. I love your description. It makes me want to read on. I love the ending where it said 2 years ago this tells you ho long ago youn saw this shadow. I love your title. The best thing about your writing is that you build suspence at the end.

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  3. Wow Luke this stories great.Well done.It is really descriptive.
    I like it how you build it up.I wish you could continue the story.

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  4. Wow! What an amazing story. I love how it builds up tense and makes you want to read more what a great ending to the story. Is the The shadow 2 coming out soon?

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