This week it is the turn of individual words. You will have 100 words to add to these:
… SUMMER BLACK EXPENSIVE POLAR BEAR FLYING …
They can be put anywhere in your writing and in any order but they must all be there. Make sure you think carefully about your writing and make it as creative as you can.
Last week the 100wc team announced that St. Joseph’s had been chosen AGAIN for the 100wc showcase. This time we have to say a huge well done to Ciara and Daniel for their very emotional piece of writing which had lots of compliments.
Well done to you both – the showcase post is here.
Mr C: Molly and Rene had a slight twist to their 100wc this week. Working together, they weren’t allowed to have any sentences the same length as one another. They were challenged to include sentences of 4, 5, 6 words, all the way to 14. How do you think they did?
I should also mention that both Molly and Rene stayed in during some of their lunch-time to fine tune their work. Great commitment!
Light beat heavily down on the placid water. Waves of serenity swamped over me. Crackling in the wind was the tranquil melody of the herins orchestra. It carved through the stillness, leaving calico ripples in its place. In distress, the burnt copper fish thrashed with distraught anticipation. The bird swooped down and with its beautiful audacious power, it angelically dived streamline into the transparent looking-glass. Up into the air soared the bird. The fish, in desperation, hung on to the beak. Crash! Their end was upon them. The fish dropped downwards.
The glistening water shimmered as the crack of dawn broke, the ever elusive sun shone brighter than ever before a bird swooped down. I was cruising along in my speed boat when suddenly, out of the corner of my eye I saw a girl screaming for help, surrounded by sharks! The sharks, raging for blood my mind was set on one thing beating the sharks I dove in the girl now demanding help. Suddenly the sharks fled in mortification! A dark shadow inclosed us in darkness! We scrambled in help back to my speed boat, ferociously squid slammed his tentacle to mark his territory.
After a stressful flight, Bob and Dave stared at each other and then went to the theme park. Bob decided to have a hotdog. He was worried because there was to many birds and he was thinking if they might take it. It happened! Suddenly the birds swooped down and pooped on Daves head. They had to go home but they couldn’t there home was on the other side on the country (spain) and right now they were in Disneyland Paris. Bob and Dave fell over there flab and got pooped on a lot again and then a hunter came and shot all the birds…
This is the 100wc that me and Joe D did. Please leave a comment.
my pet bird
Every day my life seems to be a short circuit of the same casual events . I go down for my breakfast and have my burger. Suddenly the bird swooped down and snatched my burger out of my hands. Apparently its my untrained, misunderstood bird.I stomped in rage knowing that it had stop ; knowing that it can not go on. I had to start training him for a change.
it started with a warm up then the proper exercise but it couldn’t fly. The problem was of all of the burger it ate. it was just hopeless.
A fat boy was eating a lovely sandwich and suddenly a bird swooped down and took it away.He couldn’t even get off the bench.Unusually he split his trousers he still couldn’t lift himself up. Under the shooting stars he made a wish to get up one day.After a long afternoon he eventually got up but his sandwich was missing he could not run so he bounced on his flab.The bird dropped it but the boy didn’t know. Suddenly he noticed he had squashed his sandwich. The bird had pooed on it but he still eat it.
There once was a world of vulture’s but then they all started to die. Meanwhile humans started coming alive. All of a sudden the vulture’s stopped dying and there was only one left. 10 years later the vulture grew into a strong and dangerous vulture so all of the people were in danger. The next day the vulture found a family walking along the beach. It hadn’t had any food for 2 weeks so he was hungry and the bird swooped down and took the baby. The bird took the baby back to it’s den and ate it the vulture got so full it died.
The Ice-Cream Snatcher
On a hot summers day , I was walking across the pier when I saw something flying in the air above me. I reckoned it was one of those pesky seagulls . Going for another lick of my ice-cream , I realised something . THERE WAS A CLAW IN IT ! I looked up and saw some ZOMBIE SEAGULLS . They looked inside out , the intestines dangling from its split open belly . In seconds , the birds swooped down and grabbed my ice cream with me still hanging on . Suddenly I felt this pricking sensation on my hand . They were pecking it off . I let go forgetting about the shark infested waters .
I wasn’t in schooI. I Just can’t believe that my mum mentioned that I ate slugs and snails. I was in the newspaper for that! I was like the unluckiest kid in school. Well really it all started when I walked to the pool of luck.There was a tradition that you have to pee in the pool of luck. People looked at me when I was about to pee. I couldn’t hold it that I have to pee in the ladies toilet! I ate pie after. It was half finished. I was about to bite it but a bird swooped down and ate grabbed my pie…
My mum died, it was the worst day. The only memory I have of her is when my dad said he wanted to die, but on that night that was it for my mum, she was gone. Her name was Emily Sharp. I think my mum haunts me every night, she sings me to sleep at night. She was the best mum ever; wife according to dad. I feel myself dying inside, I feel myself. I am a ghost. The back door’s wide open, I fly out. The birds swooped down and created a love heart, I could see her. “Mum, I really missed you”
All aboard! The radiant sun shone on us as we bordered our flight to Spain, no one could have predicted what was going to happen next! The flight was going fine, better than had been predicted, I saw the birds swoop down and suddenly! The left engine was out! I was horrified, I didn’t now what to do. The horrorification of it. The foreseen horrors all awaited us in the shark ridden waters! The plane began to descend, we were plummeting back down to earth, faster than the speed of light, the plane fell into darkness, what would happen to us?
As the sun came out the glistening ocean pounded against the crumbling, dark, black cliff. The scene was one of absolute beauty. I sat, on the pure wide sand, and watched, in amazement, at the view in front of me. How lucky was I to capture this moment. The waves could be heard, rushing against the cliff, from miles away, at the heart of the vast ocean. Suddenly, my vision changed over the ocean, what once looked beautiful was now appearing to be dark and dangerous. The disappearing sunlight was now not so bright and appealing it was grey and horrifying, how could this be.
As the sun came out from behind the unpromising clouds, the beach filled with lashings of light. People rejoiced merrily from behind their in-progress sandcastles and sand-filled picnics. Finally, the sun was on the human’s side! There were people from the north, south, east and west. They all seemed to dance in the sunlight. This was because; weather in Great Britain is unpredictable!
As the immortal tide bounced in and out, locals and travellers came and went. Seagulls squawked and flew endlessly around the sea and the bay, stealing peoples sandwiches mischievously. At last, the beach became lonely and deserted.