Temple run story

The helicopter turbulently jerked forward; the crumbling engen uncontrollably exploded into life. I am helplessly thrown. I’m stuck into oblivion the only thing I know is that I’m plummeting to earth.I could see earth getting closer and closer,I knew I wasn’t going to make it so I shut my eyes and hoped. Where am I am I dead or alive please tell me I’m alive.My eyes slowly fluttered open, I’m alive but at the moment I don’t no wheather it would be better not to be. I was so confused. As thoughts raced through my mind, I stood up and balanced my self. What is that gloomy figure over in the distant.  I moved closer and closer and suddenly I knew what it was.

I can’t get away from this place. Where should I go? All of the negative feelings i’ve ever had come racing back.. What shall I do and where am I? I see a golden colour shimmer in the corner of my eye. Could it be? It is the idol i’ve been dreaming about! The idol that will make my life change stood in front of me. I grabbed it but nudged a statue of a monkey, it came alive! Running for my life. How much does this really mean to me? Running and running still no ending, will I live?

Where am i? The sounds echoed around this mythical place. I started to walk until i saw something. “Whos there” i shouted all i heard was my echo shared around this vast piece of land. Then i thought i heard somethings following me. Then i looked at my hand and there was a symbol, a symbol of a face. “What is it” i asked my self. Then i saw a light glowing like fireflies so i thought i could take shelter there. I started to walk to it and see what it is. It was like a  made palace made out of gold justin the corners of my eye i spied something. My heart pounded as i made my way to the unknown building. I climbed to the temple door.

suddenly, they caught up with me and I lost it.I have no idea where to go.What should I do next? I ran as fast as a bullet shooting .I was jumping and ducking my feet were on fire.They were so so hot I  thought they are so so fast.I felt like I’m going to fall off .I started to calm down.I was scared.

Earth veered from under my feet, showering the portentous pool’s below. Suddenly, I felt a strange swaying motion rocking me back and forth. I’m falling! Is this the end of me? I was hoping to stay alive, one moment I thought it. My mind was rushing through thoughts. “Help!” I want to cry out but there is only one person who can save me, who is me. Why did I steal the idol?  Now I have this scary fear in my heart, I couldn’t barely move a muscle. Greed filled my mind. So does sweat. I saw safety with a quick glance. With a sigh of relief, I bumped into the pilot. Happily, we made a raft. I wonder if we’ll ever escape?



Race for life

Today me, my mum and friend Lucy went to Darley Park to do the race for life.If you don’t know want it is it is a charity to raise money for cancer.It’s a 5k.My time was 44 mins and 40 seconds. I raised 500 pound for cancer.

I hope next year more people join in but it is only for girls.


As the night fell, he gently lay his hands on his one and only friend.He started to play a tune with his friend.His thoughts took him back to were it all started.

A cold chill shivered down his spine;the hairs on the back of his neck stood up as a recent memory came back to him.Gently he felt a cold figure touched his face like a winter breeze.The breeze passed by and drifted away,he felt alone again.

My birthday party

This holiday I had my birthday party is was a lot of fun.It was on the 25th of may on a Saturday.I had it at megazone.  There were these other people that played and they were very competitive and rude.After megezone I had a few people back to my house it was very wild.When everybody had to leave one of my best friends mollie stayed  for a sleepover and we watched movies did our hair and nails and then she had to go at lunch time.I hope all of you that came had a fun time.

My Holiday

On Saturday I went to Poppy’s party and we went back to her house for a sleepover. We also painted our nails it was really fun some other people came back to the house too. Before I went to the party we went to get our new puppy she is called Missy because she is mischievous. She is also the best climber out of her siblings. She has settled in very well. We love her so much. She always falls asleep on me and my brother.


In the holiday I went to sundown with my mum and my sister Poppy came as well. We have been there before but there is a new part it is angry birds. Me and Poppy didn’t like it that much our favourite  part was the barrier ride because we got wet. My sisters favourite bit was looking in the fairy tale houses she liked looking at the witches cat when it made noises. Mine and Poppy’s second favourite bit was the go karts they were really fun too.

My trip

In this holiday me and my dad went on a school trip to sundown with mollie It is an adventure land theme park.We had a great time.Mine and mollies favourite ride was this barrier ride that squerted water at you it was really fun even though we got wet.Also there were go karts that me and mollie both thought was fun even though we had trouble trying to steaingr it.

My story

Before Sunrise

As night fell in the unknown city, the gloomy clouds streaked across the sky, darkening the streets. My friends enjoyed being the kings of the town. I couldn’t do it and stay with them, they always pick on me. I am not apart of them.I had to go, there was  no reason to stay with them.

Lurking through the streets, a glow hit my eyes. I stopped and thought for a minute. I thought how could I go back, my friends wouldn’t miss me. I felt a sudden urge to go on an adventure it is what I always wanted to do. The corner of my eye caught something amazing! It was as if it was calling my name but nothing ever would call me. I quickly dashed in and a gleaming light flickered before me.

I secretly tiptoed in and I heard a most gigantic sound. It was an  old beady man snoring . I climbed up the steep man and saw her my love of my life. She lit up my world, her gazing eyes glowed before me. I got closer and closer her face glittered with joy, we both saw the embarrassment but as I touched her she. . .

She burnt me! I couldn’t stay with her., I had to go.

I climbed back up the pipe I felt lost and cold, I sat on the hillside and gazed at  the moon.

As quick as my life content, the world went dark and a warm feeling went cold. I slid down the pipe and saw there was no light. she had gone I shouldn’t of walked away. Suddenly a like flicked on, but it wasn’t her.

The man came down with a scary looking grin on his face and saw me. I was so scared of what he would do to me!! I quickly dropped down. When I opened my eyes it was all dark, I couldn’t move I couldn’t breathe. I felt like I was all of a sudden in a different dimension.That was the feeling of my heart breaking. Was it the end?


Half term walk

Tuesday the 19th,me and my two friends lia and jess,went  for a walk at Alderwasley for eight mile.We had to walk though streams,fields,mud,horse manure and on the road.After we got about half way we went to a pub called The Bear.We were awfully hungry.we felt very warm because it was a sunny day and only sunny day.After our meal it was all downhill (hooray) all the way back to the car which we parked at whatstandwell train station.


The Hobbit

This christmas me and my family went to see the hobbit. I would tell you my favourite bit of the story but then I would ruin it for you. I must say if you don’t like a tiny bit of fighting then you shouldn’t watch it.Trust me it is really good! Hope you can go to the cinema and watch the trailers.

Dragon’s Den #1

Last week, the children made their chocolates that they had been planning for quite some time!

Today, they began using their Literacy skills to plan a persuasive presentation   which will take place on Thursday. Using a speech, a poster and a slideshow, the children must convince the dragons (the teachers!) that their chocolate is the most unique.

Here are some early efforts; what do you think?



Deep in side the heart of the forest there stood a ram shackled ,old dwelling.The roof was on edge of clapping.It seemed like it has deserted, unloved for longer than I have lived.Then stuttering across the creaky  floor boards was spiders but no other creatures..Then everything I touch started to wobble and break.

Then I heard a noise it sounded like tip tap tip tap.My legs started to wobble and my teeth started to quither and my heart bleated quicker. I slowly moved forward and all I could see were red eyes glowing in the dark. He quickly dashed right past me into the forest