The helicopter turbulently jerked forward;the crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life.The helicopter crashed into a million pieces of metal and glass.A instant prick touched my finger;tingles went down the back of my spine.Where is he?Horrible thoughts clouded my mind as I thought the unthinkable.Am I going to make it ?I closed my eyes and hoped.I saw something but I didn’t know what it was..I glanced at the helicopter, the pilot was gone!I looked around desperate for him, for someone,for anyone. I didn’t care if it was a stranger as long as they help me. I’m alone,hungry,thirsty and need help.I someone, anyone.I stood up and was dazzled by what I saw.
Where am I? I slowly turned my head and saw this weird place. I realised where I was in a rainforest. Shadows lurked in every corner. I thought I was going to get killed. Just then there was a loud noise, it echoed through the forest. Who is there? What is there? What is going on? Is it a tribe or an animal? I didn’t want to find out. I heard the same echo again. What should I do? I asked my self.
I can’t get away from this place .All I can think about is the money the fame.I got closer to it step by step finally I touched it. As I grabbed it I could hear funny noises in the distance. I couldn’t get away. My imagination came to life. is this the end for me? It was all I can think about is death Thoughts raced around my head. Will I die or live? Zooming out of the door and onto the ancient path pathway. Shall I keep going? Homuch does this mean to me? Am I going to survive? I must I won’t give upSuddenly they caught up with me and i lost it. I thought could this be the end the. Suddenly they spoted me so i started sprinting.My hard was aching. I felt i was going to collapse. I want to live but can i? If i run faster will i lose them? I don’t know what to to do. Maybe i should hide my self. I am scared. I dont no what to do. i was running really fast and i was tied. I was feeling guilty of stealing. It least i’ll be rich.
Earth veered from underneath my feet showering the portentous pools below.I fell down like a rock.Was it an earthquake?Bleak water engulfed.The water covered me,I thought I wouldn`t make to the next island.The water felt like it had turned into ice, but I was determined to make it.This was all up to me.I swam to safety where I bumped into the pilot.”What should we do?” I asked.He remained silent.I swam as fast as I could Then I saw sharks swimming in circles, waiting for the next victim! I wanted to runaway!! or is it to late?! Would this be the end of me??? I close my eyes and waited… For hope that I will live to see LIGHT.
The helicopter turbulently jerked forward ;the crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life.This is terrible!I couldn’t see anything even though my eyes were being forced open.I landed down.A mysterious wind shadowed out all the light and clouded my thoughts.But then,through all the mist,I see something glimmering.What is it?I can’t tell what it is?My hand gently reaches out and touches it.OWWW it was the blade of the helicopter.Then I thought of something:where is the driver?I hesitate, if I get up I could die.I began to look for him.
Where am I? This place is full of eyes of horror. I am being watched but who or what by? I ran not knowing up from down. Something strange is going on around this unknown place. All that was on my mind was who or what it was? I stopped worrying and carried on. My heart was pounding because I didn’t know where I was going. Something moved like lightning, I looked but I say nothing. Should I hide? I looked up.I saw my escape. A door wide open that I can dash into. I ran into the little room but the door had no lock so I thought I just going to keep hold…..
I can’t get away from this place. There are too many thoughts racing around my head and they won’t go away. Out of the blue, something caught my eye. The beautiful shimmering idol. I reached out to grab it when I heard a noise. I can’t believe it. As the noise came near I sprinted with all my might. I feel the warmth of the monkeys getting closer to me. Is this the end? It can’t be, can this be real? It felt like all the blood rushed to my head as I raced out the doorway.
Suddenly they caught up with me and I lost it. The monkeys were crazy, what were they doing? When I turned around I saw them jumping at me trying to scratch me. I was so scared all I could do was run. As I ran I thought that the monkeys would stop chasing me but they won’t. I was nervous I was wondering will I live or die? I think I have a plan. Climb up a tree and hide. I’m Guy dangerous I don’t run away, or do I? Let’s find out.
Earth veered from under my feet,showering the portentous pools below.I could feel the agony in my body strudling. I felt sweat dripping down my face.My heart is pumping with fear. I could feel something nibbling my feet while I was looking for safety. It was something so strong that it has the ability to. My feet are torn away from solid grow, with it my hope .I thought I died.The air brushes against my bone – chilling my face! I knew that it was the end . No it wasn’t, I was surprised to see i’m alive. Or maybe i’m dead?Water laid at my body a familiar face hovered above me.
The helicopter turbulently jerked forward; the crumbling engen uncontrollably exploded into life. I am helplessly thrown. I’m stuck into oblivion the only thing I know is that I’m plummeting to earth.I could see earth getting closer and closer,I knew I wasn’t going to make it so I shut my eyes and hoped. Where am I am I dead or alive please tell me I’m alive.My eyes slowly fluttered open, I’m alive but at the moment I don’t no wheather it would be better not to be. I was so confused. As thoughts raced through my mind, I stood up and balanced my self. What is that gloomy figure over in the distant. I moved closer and closer and suddenly I knew what it was.
I can’t get away from this place. Where should I go? All of the negative feelings i’ve ever had come racing back.. What shall I do and where am I? I see a golden colour shimmer in the corner of my eye. Could it be? It is the idol i’ve been dreaming about! The idol that will make my life change stood in front of me. I grabbed it but nudged a statue of a monkey, it came alive! Running for my life. How much does this really mean to me? Running and running still no ending, will I live?
Where am i? The sounds echoed around this mythical place. I started to walk until i saw something. “Whos there” i shouted all i heard was my echo shared around this vast piece of land. Then i thought i heard somethings following me. Then i looked at my hand and there was a symbol, a symbol of a face. “What is it” i asked my self. Then i saw a light glowing like fireflies so i thought i could take shelter there. I started to walk to it and see what it is. It was like a made palace made out of gold justin the corners of my eye i spied something. My heart pounded as i made my way to the unknown building. I climbed to the temple door.
suddenly, they caught up with me and I lost it.I have no idea where to go.What should I do next? I ran as fast as a bullet shooting .I was jumping and ducking my feet were on fire.They were so so hot I thought they are so so fast.I felt like I’m going to fall off .I started to calm down.I was scared.
Earth veered from under my feet, showering the portentous pool’s below. Suddenly, I felt a strange swaying motion rocking me back and forth. I’m falling! Is this the end of me? I was hoping to stay alive, one moment I thought it. My mind was rushing through thoughts. “Help!” I want to cry out but there is only one person who can save me, who is me. Why did I steal the idol? Now I have this scary fear in my heart, I couldn’t barely move a muscle. Greed filled my mind. So does sweat. I saw safety with a quick glance. With a sigh of relief, I bumped into the pilot. Happily, we made a raft. I wonder if we’ll ever escape?
The helicopter turbulently jerks forward engine crumbling engine uncontrollably exploded into life. I suddenly dropped in shock,it felt like I was flying.I looked around me it was just trees and mud.It was a, golden dust tip pyramid. What exactly was it?I gently moved forward. Not knowing where I was as I glanced up and I saw a bark of tree.I slowly as felt a sharp pain as I realised the pilot was gone.It was worst than my nightmare
Where am I? My head is full of questions that I could not answer. Eyes were everywhere I was being followed. What is following me? I asked myself in my mind. I heard footsteps behind me. I turned there was nothing. What could have been caused the thudding on the lifeless floor? thought it could be a tree chopping towards me. I heard another loud bang, I heard leaves being crushed underneath me. What is following me? why? I saw a temple, I saw a door, racing to it, I found a chance to get rid of the thing that was chasing me. Do I have the time to do it? I saw the temple behind them, that’s when I took the wrong turn, I ran towards it.
I can’t get away from this place. I think i’ve seen it before, but where? My dreams are coming alive, my thoughts are racing through my mind. Am I alone is anyone here? That is all I wanted to know, apart from the how am I meant to go home? There it was and I reached for it but as i reached for it but as I touched it I could hear howling monkeys in the distance. Out I came zooming out of the temple door
Suddenly they caught up with me and i lost it. will i live or die? what are they and what were they doing. I was running i jumped and i got away. but it wasn’t over yet it was just beginning. i ran faster faster and faster until they started to disappear. i don’t know what to do now. I think i should fight. No that would be crazy or would it be. I could die. or i could live or i could be injured.
Earth veered from under my feet, showering the portentous pools below.My feet trembleswhile, running through the hard stone path.My knees are tnickling with blood but i carry on running. With a fall I was splashing trying to flout. I had a feeling i would die,right here,right now. Breaking loose from the path it begins to ebb away. Am i still alive? I hesitate in fear. I tried to seal my hands. I couldn’t even move them. I swam to the island were bumped into someone. he looked familiar?The relief of life immersed me in its warm embrace. Will I ever escape from this creepy and magic place?
Here is my temple run paragraph(Climax) which I had to do whilst doing Slow Writing.
He could hear the wall’s crumbling and could see the golden idol but could smell damp and wet dog.Slow,Cooling,Breezing wind blew on his face. Slowly, he reached for the idol. As he pulled the golden idol back he nudged one of the monkey statues and they came alive. This was it. What shall he do? Rrrruuuunnnn.
Sliping,sliding and sluttering from the huge clif.
Guy Dangerous who had ginger hair ,fell into the dark blue water.
After that he was swimming for hours and hours to find and island and food.
Slowly he heard a noise.
A minute later he saw a hat of a pilot moving,he got it out and saw the pilot swimming.
Finally,they went out of the gloomy ,blue water and started to bulid a wooden ship.
Would they ever escape?
This is a story about temple run.
My eyes fluted open to hear the sound of birds tweeting and the sight of monkey’s swinging. Swiftly, quickly but luxuriously the monkey’s sawed through the trees. My strong arms pulled me up the trees as I searched for refuge then I saw the temple. I was exited because no adventurer as ever got inside. Finally, the temple. Who knows what was inside?
My running is to fast for these monkeys.They are behind me though,my heart is racing my and my mind is pondering, will I ever escape? My mind is racing my heart is pumping and I am running out of oxygen.As fast as a racing car I zoomed past the other monkeys.My legs rushing my arms flying,myself concentrated.Money is mine! A second later they have gone and I am wondering Will I ever pull through?!!!
Snatching the golden treasure without him knowing the they are the risks. The idol’s features shimmered upon the temple ceiling. Suspiciously, he heard howling monkeys in the distance.
As quick as a flash, came out him zooming out of the temple door and onto the ancient pathways, Fear painted his face making his face pale as a lion’s fur. Reaching his final destination but will he survive?…